For our secret 7 live brief, we presented our 5 variations of our design to our peers. In my crit group was Jordan, Leo, Abi, Jamie and Issy. The work displayed was all really interesting and well depicted for the artist's the chose to represent.
For my secret 7 project I decided to chose Jessie Ware. From the 5 variations I had displayed along with my design sheets and developments, my group decided upon my ink painted design of her.
The feedback I received was very positive and my group liked what I had created. They also offered some idea's and opinions to help improve my work which I found useful.
- Make the painting more small and central
- Less saturation of the colour
- The brownness of the face and the darker coloured ink would look nicer combined
- You could experiment with 4 images for the ratchet test variation
- Mid way between the running of the ink and the crispness of the lines
- Use soft rubber on Photoshop
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