I was particularly pleased with the feedback I received as I felt my work successfully communicated the message I wanted to portray and the design decisions I made where also understood.
Things I did successfully
some of the comments that stood out to me about my design where
- "Each design is distinct and clearly understood"
- "The type and image is high impact without actually reading it, the blacked out eyes are most memorable"
- "The imagery of the girls body falling apart is shocking and controversial"
- "Very focused and shows research well, a lot of information but not to much. The message is clear and shown in a aesthetically pleasing way"
- "Very memorable, something you won't forget"
- "Uses colours appropriately/ connotes mood and shows the message clearly"
- "The posters all link together visually and it's easy to see this"
I was happy the message was clear to my critics as they fitted into the target market I was designing for.
Things I need to consider
some of the comments that stood out to me about my design where
- "The imagery could be developed further e.g the drugs above her head"
- "The choice of font makes only the letter 'e' lowercase"
- "I don't understand why the letters 'i.o.u' are in blue"
- "The colours of blue are slightly a different colour"
- " The lost souls on the cap makes it look like an advertisement and is slightly misleading"
- "Statements, facts, statistic and rhetorical questions don't make it simple and to the point"
I agreed with the suggestions made and will take on board the comments when developing my design further.
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